DreamForge original narration drafts — planning only
6 November 2026. No voice recorded or generated; timing is not measured audio.

coffee-01 / planned 4 seconds
FIRST DRAFT
The cup is on the table and the server is moving into position before coffee is poured.
EDITED SCRIPT
A moment to get ready.
DECISION
Remove a literal description of the arrangement; keep a short opening thought.

coffee-02 / planned 5 seconds
FIRST DRAFT
Now the coffee pours from the glass server into the cup while we hold a steady close-up view.
EDITED SCRIPT
One slow pour, with room to pause.
DECISION
Remove camera terminology and redundant object names from the spoken copy.

coffee-03 / planned 4 seconds
FIRST DRAFT
We finish by looking at the filled cup as a gentle trace of steam rises above the surface.
EDITED SCRIPT
Then a quiet finish.
DECISION
Give the ending less spoken information so the planned closing view has space.